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I remember, it was like laying down on the cold comfortable ground
Red frost of autumn leaves woven through careless hair
But also like a room flooded by the dusk that made you feel so sound
As the wooden chair in the room, it was forgotten, but it didn't care
It felt like lying still under the placid water where you could never drown
Vision blurred by the water above it, all that could be done was to stare
Tense and paranoid lily pad eyes always pondered questions that were profound
It resembled walking bare footed down dark ice covered corridors totally unaware
Until afterwards, skin ripped from my soul, bloody prints left behind, and my naivety renowned
Red frost of autumn leaves woven through careless hair
But also like a room flooded by the dusk that made you feel so sound
As the wooden chair in the room, it was forgotten, but it didn't care
It felt like lying still under the placid water where you could never drown
Vision blurred by the water above it, all that could be done was to stare
Tense and paranoid lily pad eyes always pondered questions that were profound
It resembled walking bare footed down dark ice covered corridors totally unaware
Until afterwards, skin ripped from my soul, bloody prints left behind, and my naivety renowned
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its a full time job being this stupid
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I love this; I don't understand it, I don't think I ever will understand it, and I am perfectly happy that way.
It's very good, and if this kind of thing is you being 'stupid', I can't wait to read a piece you think is brilliant.
It's very good, and if this kind of thing is you being 'stupid', I can't wait to read a piece you think is brilliant.